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Specifically, the following critical elements must be addressed:

  1. Introduction: This is where readers will have a chance to get an idea of what your essay will be about and what you will prove throughout. Do not give all of your information away here, but give readers a sample of what is to come. Do not forget to review your writing plan to make sure you are hitting all of the points that you planned out, while also stating your claim.
    1. Provides an overview of the issue you have selected, briefly describing main points and your argument.
    2. Compose an engaging thesis that states the argument that you will prove and support throughout your essay. This statement will give direction to your essay and should be well thought out.
  2. Body: The body is your opportunity to describe and support your argument in depth. Make sure your thoughts and evidence are clear and organized in a way that is easy for readers to follow and understand.
    1. Be sure that you write multiple paragraphs that are focused, clearly state their intent, and move logically from one to the other, building the thesis argument as the essay progresses.
    2. Your body paragraphs should support your argument by combining thoughts and ideas with evidence from sources. There is no such thing as a right or wrong argument; the key is how it is supported and the quality of the evidence used.
    3. Address and refute any opposing viewpoints to your argument. This is your chance to discredit any opposing views, thus strengthening your own.
  3. Conclusion: Think of the conclusion as a review of your argument. Use this section to restate your argument and remind readers of your supporting evidence. Think of this as your last chance to persuade readers to agree with you.
    1. Review your argument. This section should consist of a review of your main points employed to support your argument. Think of this as your last chance to prove your point or your closing arguments.
    2. Your conclusion should articulate insights about your argument established through your essay. This should follow logically from your essay, referring to key points or quotes used to support your argument.
 
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Some lessons from the Assembly line,

Activity: Reverse Outline (GRADED)

NOTE: This activity will be graded based on completion.

For this activity, you will use the reverse outlining* process and the TEA* formula to help you to revise your critical analysis essay draft. Follow the steps below:

  1. Print out a copy of your essay draft. If you need to generate another copy of your draft, you can revisit 5-3. If you are unable to print a copy of your draft, you can open up your essay document in a word processing program like Microsoft Word and turn on the “Comments” feature that will allow you to insert comments in the margins of the paper.
  2. Write your thesis statement at the top of the page so that you can refer back to it easily.
  3. Click on the following tab to analyze the effectiveness of your thesis statement.

Thesis

When reviewing your essay using TEA, the first step is to analyze your thesis statement*, or your main claim. You should be able to answer “yes” to the following questions:

  1. Is there a thesis statement? Does it appear at the end of the introductory paragraph?
  2. Does my thesis statement express one single central idea/opinion in response to the essay prompt or course-related topic?
  3. Have I arrived at a thesis statement only after a careful and well thought out consideration of the prompt or topic and evidence at my disposal?
  4. Does my thesis statement express my opinion?
  5. Has my thesis statement remained the same as a result of the evidence* that I selected? If not, then you need to revise your thesis statement right away.
  1. Based on your answers to the questions, make any necessary changes to your thesis statement. You should make these edits directly on the page. (Because this is a draft, you can scribble notes on it, cross things out, and mark up the page as much as you would like.)
  2. Read one paragraph at a time and write the main idea of each paragraph in the margins of your paper. Remember that the main idea of the introductory paragraph should be the thesis statement (the last sentence of that paragraph).
  3. Click on the following tab to analyze the effectiveness of your topic sentences, the evidence that supports the thesis statement, and your analysis of the evidence. You will need to do this for each body paragraph.

Topic Sentences

The next step is to analyze the topic sentences* of your body paragraphs. You should be able to answer “yes” to the following questions:

  1. Do I have a topic sentence at the beginning of each body paragraph?
  2. Do my topic sentences relate back to the thesis statement?

Evidence

Analysis

  1. Based on your answers to these questions, make any necessary edits to your draft. Again, you should make these changes directly on the page.
 
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Some lessons from the Assembly line,

DISCUSSION QUESTIONS

                                                                     Amy Wilk

Southern New Hampshire University

November 27, 2016

Discussion Questions

  1. After re-reading your selected article, write a 3-4 sentence overview of the work, briefly describing main points and your thoughts about the writing. Include the author’s name and title of the article in this overview. These sentences will be part of your Introduction.

The chosen article is ‘Some lessons from the Assembly line,’ authored by Andrew Braaksma. The author basically describes his experiences in working in a factory during summer. In addition to that, he highlights his experiences and the way it shaped him value education.

  • In Assignment 1: Writing Plan, you wrote a claim* to be addressed in your analysis essay. The claim should again clearly state what you believe is the author’s goal in his or her article, your reaction to this goal (e.g., do you agree or disagree?), and why you had this reaction. After re-reading and re-evaluating the article, do you want to change your claim? If so, re-write your claim in the textbox below. If you are still happy with your original claim, enter it again in the textbox.

In my claim I believe Education is the key to success. My belief concurs with the author’s goal that education is the key to success and that experience serves as the best teacher. After reading the claim, I would want to ensure I work and study hard in equal measures.

  • In Assignment 1: Writing Plan, you listed three possible key points* that the author used to support his or her goal. Re-write the first supporting point in the textbox below. Then list one way in which the reading supports this point

The key points as discussed include the benefits of education, difficulty in transitioning from between school and full time blue collar job, the spirit of motivation. The author argues for individuals understanding the meaning of education as it may be undervalued in the short term but pays in the long run.

  • Now look for specific evidence* to support this first key point. The evidence should be a direct quote* from the article, a summary* of a section of the article, or a paraphrased* section of the article. Include the evidence in the textbox. (Remember to put quotation marks around direct quotes and cite the source in either MLA or APA format. For a brief overview.

In the article, the author asserts that, ‘The things that factory work has taught me–how lucky I am to get an education, how to work  hard,  how  easy  it  is  to  lose  that  work  once  you  have  it–are  by  no  means  earth-shattering( Braaksma, 2005).’’ The aforementioned quote generally supports the3 first point that hard work is the key to success.

  • Write 1-2 sentences that explain how this piece of evidence supports the author’s goal (from Question 2). Then, write 4 or more sentences that explain your reaction to the author’s key point (e.g., do you agree or disagree with this key point and its evidence? Do you think the author met his/her goal with the evidence that is being presented? Does additional information need to be included?) Remember to elaborate on your reaction

The above quote explain the author’s stance on what he feels about valuing education and that losing a job could happen any time. I personally concur with the author when he asserts that doing part-time jobs does not really expose students to the real life. In addition to that, the author meets his goal in conveying information to students on the benefits of studying hard. No additional information is to be included.

  • Write the second key point/supporting point from your Assignment 1: Writing Plan notes in the textbox below

The second key point generally involves the difficulty in transitioning from school to a full time blue collar job.

7.Now look for specific evidence to support this second key point. The evidence should be a direct quote from the article, a summary of a section of the article, or a paraphrased section of the article. Include the evidence in the textbox. (Remember to put quotation marks around direct quotes.)

The author asserts that, ‘For  a  student  like  me  who  considers  any  class  before  noon  to  be uncivilized, getting to a factory by 6 o’clock each morning, where rows of hulking, spark-showering machines  have  replaced  the  lush  campus  and  cavernous  lecture  halls  of  college  life,  is  torture( Braaksma, 2005)’.

  • Write 1-2 sentences that explain how this piece of evidence supports your claim (from Question 2). Then, write 4 or more sentences that explain your reaction to the author’s key point (e.g., do you agree or disagree with this key point and its evidence? Do you think the author met his/her goal with the evidence that is being presented? Does additional information need to be included?) Remember to elaborate on your reaction

For a fact, transitioning from school to a blue collar job is such an uphill task or rather torture. However, the author justifies that it pays at the long run as one is able to know what the real life entails. The author definitely met his goal form the aforementioned evidence. No additional information is included as the author nails it the way it should be.

  • Write the third key point/supporting point from your Assignment 1: Writing Plan notes in the textbox below.

The third key pint is that the author asserts that he finds it torture constantly waking up at six in the morning to go to work in the factory. From assignment one, the aforesaid are one of the main reasons students fear getting into blue collar jobs.

  1. Now look for specific evidence to support this third key point. The evidence should be a direct quote from the article, a summary of a section of the article, or a paraphrased section of the article. Include the evidence in the textbox. (Remember to put quotation marks around direct quotes.)

The author in his article asserts that, ‘Last June, as I stood behind the bright orange guard door of the machine, listening to the crackling  hiss  of  the  automatic  welders,  I  thought  about  how  different  my  life  had  been  just  a  few  weeks earlier( Braaksma, 2005)’

  1. Write 1-2 sentences that explain how this piece of evidence supports your claim (from Question 2). Then, write 4 or more sentences that explain your reaction to the author’s key point (e.g., do you agree or disagree with this key point and its evidence? Do you think the author met his/her goal with the evidence that is being presented? Does additional information need to be included?) Remember to elaborate on your reaction

The aforementioned basically explains how he got it difficult to adapt to a new life. As a student, the author was not fond of waking up that early to go to school. My reaction to the author’s point is that I concur. Transitioning, especially from time of waking up, is always a very difficult task. For that reason, I strongly agree with the author on how adapting to a new schedule can be difficult. The author met his goal as he was able to convey the message of time management in the quest for success.

  1. Re-state your claim exactly as it is stated in Question 2.

My claim as stated in question 2 basically points out to the difficulty one can have in transitioning from campus life to a job environment life.

  1. Write 3-4 sentences that summarize your reaction to the author’s key supporting points (Questions 3-11).

The author’s key points basically point out on the importance of education and the challenges that come by in transitioning from a work case scenario. The author asserts that transitioning from school to a blue collar job might be difficult. However, it assists students to learn that there is more to education and hence it should not be taken for granted.

  1. Explain at least 2 insights* about your claim established through your analysis.

The idea of education being the key to success is a concept that should be understood by all students. Apart from being in class, they ought to go out and get conversant with what real life awaits them then. In addition to that, students should understand that there are a lot of challenges as they transition from school to job life.

References

Braaksma, A. (2005). Some Lessons fromthe Assembly Line. Newsweek, 146(11), 17.

 
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some lessons from the Assembly line

Some Lessons From The Assembly Line.

Authors:

Braaksma, Andrew

Source:

Newsweek. 9/12/2005, Vol. 146 Issue 11, p17-17. 1p. 1 Color Photograph.

Document Type:

Article

Subjects:

COLLEGE students
INDUSTRIAL workers
APPRENTICES
OCCUPATIONS
COLLEGE environment

Geographic Terms:

UNITED States

Abstract:

Describes the author’s experiences with summer jobs and the differences with college life. Comparison of the difficulties of working 12-hour days in a factory with leisurely college life; Lessons learned about the value of education; How the author applies his factory work lessons to his college studies; Why the author chooses to work in a factory and live at home during the summer; Discussion of the value of his work experiences.

Full Text Word Count:

890

Accession Number:

18139488

Some Lessons From The Assembly Line 

Section:

My Turn

Sweating away my summers as a factory worker makes me more than happy to hit the books.

Last June, as I stood behind the bright orange guard door of the machine, listening to the crackling hiss of the automatic welders, I thought about how different my life had been just a few weeks earlier. Then, I was writing an essay about French literature to complete my last exam of the spring semester at college. Now I stood in an automotive plant in southwest Michigan, making subassemblies for a car manufacturer.

I have worked as a temp in the factories surrounding my hometown every summer since I graduated from high school, but making the transition between school and full-time blue-collar work during the break never gets any easier. For a student like me who considers any class before noon to be uncivilized, getting to a factory by 6 o’clock each morning, where rows of hulking, spark-showering machines have replaced the lush campus and cavernous lecture halls of college life, is torture. There my time is spent stamping, cutting, welding, moving or assembling parts, the rigid work schedules and quotas of the plant making days spent studying and watching “SportsCenter” seem like a million years ago.

I chose to do this work, rather than bus tables or fold sweatshirts at the Gap, for the overtime pay and because living at home is infinitely cheaper than living on campus for the summer. My friends who take easier, part-time jobs never seem to understand why I’m so relieved to be back at school in the fall or that my summer vacation has been anything but a vacation.

There are few things as cocksure as a college student who has never been out in the real world, and people my age always seem to overestimate the value of their time and knowledge. After a particularly exhausting string of 12-hour days at a plastics factory, I remember being shocked at how small my check seemed. I couldn’t believe how little I was taking home after all the hours I spent on the sweltering production floor. And all the classes in the world could not have prepared me for my battles with the machine I ran in the plant, which would jam whenever I absent-mindedly put in a part backward or upside down.

As frustrating as the work can be, the most stressful thing about blue-collar life is knowing your job could disappear overnight. Issues like downsizing and overseas relocation had always seemed distant to me until my co-workers at one factory told me that the unit I was working in would be shut down within six months and moved to Mexico, where people would work for 60 cents an hour.

Factory life has shown me what my future might have been like had I never gone to college in the first place. For me, and probably many of my fellow students, higher education always seemed like a foregone conclusion: I never questioned if I was going to college, just where. No other options ever occurred to me.

After working 12-hour shifts in a factory, the other options have become brutally clear. When I’m back at the university, skipping classes and turning in lazy re-writes seems like a cop-out after seeing what I would be doing without school. All the advice and public-service announcements about the value of an education that used to sound trite now ring true.

These lessons I am learning, however valuable, are always tinged with a sense of guilt. Many people pass their lives in the places I briefly work, spending 30 years where I spend only two months at a time. When fall comes around, I get to go back to a sunny and beautiful campus, while work in the factories continues. At times I feel almost voyeuristic, like a tourist dropping in where other people make their livelihoods. My lessons about education are learned at the expense of those who weren’t fortunate enough to receive one. “This job pays well, but it’s hell on the body,” said one co-worker. “Study hard and keep reading,” she added, nodding at the copy of Jack Kerouac’s “On the Road” I had wedged into the space next to my machine so I could read discreetly when the line went down.

My experiences will stay with me long after I head back to school and spend my wages on books and beer. The things that factory work has taught me–how lucky I am to get an education, how to work hard, how easy it is to lose that work once you have it–are by no means earth-shattering. Everyone has to come to grips with them at some point. How and when I learned these lessons, however, has inspired me to make the most of my college years before I enter the real world for good. Until then, the summer months I spend in the factories will be long, tiring and every bit as educational as a French-lit class.

PHOTO (COLOR): Is that all? After an exhausting string of 12-hour days, I remember being shocked at how small my check seemed

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By Andrew Braaksma

Braaksma, a junior at the University of Michigan, wrote the winning essay in our “Back To School” contest.


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