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Authors:                                Braaksma, Andrew

Source:                                 Newsweek. 9/12/2005, Vol. 146 Issue 11, p17-17. 1p. 1 Color Photograph.

Document Type:                Article

Subjects:                              COLLEGE students’
INDUSTRIAL workers
APPRENTICES
OCCUPATIONS
COLLEGE environment

Geographic Terms:           UNITED States

Abstract:                               Describes the author’s experiences with summer jobs and the differences with college life. Comparison of the difficulties of working 12-hour days in a factory with leisurely college life; Lessons learned about the value of education; How the author applies his factory work lessons to his college studies; Why the author chooses to work in a factory and live at home during the summer; Discussion of the value of his work experiences.

Some Lessons from the Assembly Line

Sweating away my summers as a factory worker makes me more than happy to hit the books.

Last June, as I stood behind the bright orange guard door of the machine, listening to the crackling hiss of the automatic welders, I thought about how different my life had been just a few weeks earlier. Then, I was writing an essay about French literature to complete my last exam of the spring semester at college. Now I stood in an automotive plant in southwest Michigan, making subassemblies for a car manufacturer.

I have worked as a temp in the factories surrounding my hometown every summer since I graduated from high school, but making the transition between school and full-time blue-collar work during the break never gets any easier. For a student like me who considers any class before noon to be uncivilized, getting to a factory by 6 o’clock each morning, where rows of hulking, spark-showering machines have replaced the lush campus and cavernous lecture halls of college life, is torture. There my time is spent stamping, cutting, welding, moving or assembling parts, the rigid work schedules and quotas of the plant making days spent studying and watching “Sports Center” seem like a million years ago.

I chose to do this work, rather than bus tables or fold sweatshirts at the Gap, for the overtime pay and because living at home is infinitely cheaper than living on campus for the summer. My friends who take easier, part-time jobs never seem to understand why I’m so relieved to be back at school in the fall or that my summer vacation has been anything but a vacation.

There are few things as cocksure as a college student who has never been out in the real world, and people my age always seem to overestimate the value of their time and knowledge. After a particularly exhausting string of 12-hour days at a plastics factory, I remember being shocked at how small my check seemed. I couldn’t believe how little I was taking home after all the hours I spent on the sweltering production floor. And all the classes in the world could not have prepared me for my battles with the machine I ran in the plant, which would jam whenever I absent-mindedly put in a part backward or upside down.

As frustrating as the work can be, the most stressful thing about blue-collar life is knowing your job could disappear overnight. Issues like downsizing and overseas relocation had always seemed distant to me until my co-workers at one factory told me that the unit I was working in would be shut down within six months and moved to Mexico, where people would work for 60 cents an hour.

Factory life has shown me what my future might have been like had I never gone to college in the first place. For me, and probably many of my fellow students, higher education always seemed like a foregone conclusion: I never questioned if I was going to college, just where. No other options ever occurred to me.

After working 12-hour shifts in a factory, the other options have become brutally clear. When I’m back at the university, skipping classes and turning in lazy re-writes seems like a cop-out after seeing what I would be doing without school. All the advice and public-service announcements about the value of an education that used to sound trite now ring true.

These lessons I am learning, however valuable, are always tinged with a sense of guilt. Many people pass their lives in the places I briefly work, spending 30 years where I spend only two months at a time. When fall comes around, I get to go back to a sunny and beautiful campus, while work in the factories continues. At times I feel almost voyeuristic, like a tourist dropping in where other people make their livelihoods. My lessons about education are learned at the expense of those who weren’t fortunate enough to receive one. “This job pays well, but its hell on the body,” said one co-worker. “Study hard and keep reading,” she added, nodding at the copy of Jack Kerouac’s “On the Road” I had wedged into the space next to my machine so I could read discreetly when the line went down.

My experiences will stay with me long after I head back to school and spend my wages on books and beer. The things that factory work has taught me–how lucky I am to get an education, how to work hard, how easy it is to lose that work once you have it–are by no means earth-shattering. Everyone has to come to grips with them at some point. How and when I learned these lessons, however, has inspired me to make the most of my college years before I enter the real world for good. Until then, the summer months I spend in the factories will be long, tiring and every bit as educational as a French-lit class.

PHOTO (COLOR): Is that all? After an exhausting string of 12-hour days, I remember being shocked at how small my check seemed

By Andrew Braaksma

Braaksma, a junior at the University of Michigan, wrote the winning essay in our “Back to School” contest.

 
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analysis techniques

I have 7 questions that I need answer of the essay attached.

  • 1.  Re-read your selected article and take careful notes, using analysis techniques described in Module Two as guidance. For a review of these techniques, please click here. Then, revisit your original interpretation of the author’s goal. Has the author’s goal changed with this analytical reading of the text? If so, how? If not, why not?
  • 2.  Have you identified new key points that the author uses to try to achieve his or her goal in the selected article? If so, include them here. If not, explain why the key points from your Writing Notes have remained the same, even after conducting an active reading of the article.
  • 3.  Consider the audience who will be reading your essay. What potential challenges will you have supporting your argument with this demographic?
  • 4.  Your goal is the end result that you wish to achieve in writing the critical analysis essay. What goal do you hope to accomplish with this essay? For example, you may disagree with the author and demonstrate why they are incorrect, or you may agree but want to further substantiate their claim.
  • 5.  Evidence is the material that supports your argument. Based on your claim, determine potential places where evidence would be most effective. Defend your choices. For example, if you disagree with an author’s point, you would want to use evidence to support your view.
  • 6.  You will be receiving feedback on this writing plan. Feedback is helpful information or criticism that explains what can be done to improve your essay. How can your own writing improve from receiving feedback from an outside party? How can that feedback be integrated in the final project?

7.  During the revision process, a writer rereads the essay and makes significant changes in content, organization, etc. to build the argument in a stronger, more logical manner. You will learn more about revision strategies in Module 7, but some of the most common revision techniques are peer evaluation (where you have a classmate review your essay and provide you with feedback), read aloud (where you print out a hard copy of your essay and read it aloud slowly), and read backwards (where you read the essay backwards word by word or paragraph by paragraph). Identify a revision strategy that would be most effective in informing you while writing this essay. Why would this strategy be effectiv

 
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Affordable care act

Affordable care act

             

The Patient Protection and Affordable Care Act (PPACA) is frequently called as the Affordable Care Act (ACA) or “Obamacare” is a Federal statute marked by President Barack Obama in 2010 in the United States. The real motivation behind the law was to build the quality and moderateness of the medical coverage among the masses along with bringing down the uninsured rate through a deliberate private insurance coverage arrangement as well as protecting consumers from the Insurance Company tactics that may deny patients care or bring up costs.

ACA  is a bill that was marked into law to battle these human service issues, lower coverage costs and protect consumers.The objective of Obama consideration is to give moderate medical coverage to all U.S. residents.  For a considerable length of time Americans have faced issues within their own insurance coverage, whether it be with coverage denial due to preexisting conditions or premiums that are not affordable. A 2015 survey shows that on a daily, human services spending in America is more than 40% higher than any other country taken into account. (Obama care facts, 2013)  ACA additionally tries to decrease the cost rise in medical service spending by actualizing some cost restrictions and investment funds and by also placing new controls and standards on insurance agencies that will enhance therapeutic practices and wellbeing results.

In the first 5 years of ACA over 16 billion Americans were able to acquire Insurance. ACA permits youthful grown-ups, which make up a very large percentage of the people who are now insured, to remain under a “guardians”plan until age 26. Consumers who have pre-existing conditions would face difficult challenges in getting health insurance. Many companies would not cover treatment for any conditions that existed prior to enrolling in a plan. With ACA coverage cannot be denied due to a prior health issue.

Prior to ACA many screenings were not covered which lead many consumers to not get tested. Under ACA preventative services and screenings are now covered and/or have low co-pays and deductibles. The thought behind getting the kind of coverage is that by doing these screenings and tests you are able to know what is going on with your health. The healthier the consumer is the lower their costs will end up being in the long run. Greateraccess to care as a result of being insured has been shown to reduce mortality, improve mentalhealth, and improve self-reported health status. “The ACA is going to help all Americans have higher quality and less costly healthcare in the decades to come,” says Dr. Christopher Lillis, an internist in Virginia and a member of Doctors for America

ACA has faced some criticism due to now having screenings covered alongside with pre-existing condition denial of coverage out the window.  Since many companies are now providing consumers with a broader rage or coverage this has spiked the prices of premiums for consumers who previously already had health coverage. Not only have premiums increased but taxes have also been risen. Additional taxes were created for those who have high income and also taxes have been put on pharmaceutical sales as well as medical devices.

ACA has also gone under fire for the simple fact that we are now fined for not having health Insurance. Many find it not only intrusive but also find that it strips them of their rights that the government forces requires health insurance. Those who have been forced to sign up with the ACA have also complained that enrolling has been very complicated.

Though ACA has gone through many critiques and many are not happy the amount of people ACA has benefited is by far greater than the number of those who are unhappy by this law. The cons do not outweigh the pros. Millions who once were not eligible for Insurance are now able to be covered ad help make sure their health is on track. Those who once feared denial of coverage due to prior medical conditions can now rest peacefully knowing that they are able to get services covered like any other person who does not have a preexisting condition. Although premiums have gone up for those who had prior Insurance I still think it is worth it since the coverage has also increased. All in all ACA which was set into place back in 2010 has helped millions of Americans nationwide.

 

References

  • “Obama Offers Ways to Improve His Health Care Law.” n.d. http://www.nytimes.com/2016/07/12/us/politics/affordable-care-act-obamacare.html?_r=0.
  • “ObamaCare Facts: Facts on the Affordable Care Act.” n.d. http://obamacarefacts.com/obamacare-facts/.
  • “Obamacare Individual Mandate.” n.d. https://whatisobamacare.com/obamacare-individual-mandate/.
  • “What are the pros and cons of ObamaCare?” 2014. http://www.enotes.com/homework-help/what-pros-cons-obama-care-467344.
  • Health insurance coverage and the affordable care act.” (2015, May 5)http://aspe.hhs.gov/health/reports/2015/uninsured_change/ib_uninsured_change.pdf
  • “Advocating for improvements to the Affordable Care Act.” (2015). http://asts.org/docs/default-source/legislative/ama-position-on-improvements-to-affordable-care-act-january-20-2011.pdf?sfvrsn=4
  • “Pros and Cons of ObamaCare” 2016 http://www.healthline.com/health/consumer-healthcare-guide/pros-and-cons-obamacare#Cons3
 
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Reverse Outline

Activity: Reverse Outline (GRADED)

NOTE: This activity will be graded based on completion.

For this activity, you will use the reverse outlining* process and the TEA* formula to help you to revise your critical analysis essay draft. Follow the steps below:

  1. Print out a copy of your essay draft. If you need to generate another copy of your draft, you can revisit 5-3. If you are unable to print a copy of your draft, you can open up your essay document in a word processing program like Microsoft Word and turn on the “Comments” feature that will allow you to insert comments in the margins of the paper.
  2. Write your thesis statement at the top of the page so that you can refer back to it easily.
  3. Click on the following tab to analyze the effectiveness of your thesis statement.

Thesis

  1. Based on your answers to the questions, make any necessary changes to your thesis statement. You should make these edits directly on the page. (Because this is a draft, you can scribble notes on it, cross things out, and mark up the page as much as you would like.)
  2. Read one paragraph at a time and write the main idea of each paragraph in the margins of your paper. Remember that the main idea of the introductory paragraph should be the thesis statement (the last sentence of that paragraph).
  3. Click on the following tab to analyze the effectiveness of your topic sentences, the evidence that supports the thesis statement, and your analysis of the evidence. You will need to do this for each body paragraph.

Topic Sentences

Evidence

Analysis

  1. Based on your answers to these questions, make any necessary edits to your draft. Again, you should make these changes directly on the page.

Generating an Updated Draft

After you have completed the steps above, break apart your essay so that you have three sections—an introduction, a body, and a conclusion. Then enter your revised essay sections based on the specific TEA analysis of each portion into the textboxes below.

The next activity uses a rich text area. You can tab to the editor body. Press ALT-F10 to get to the toolbar. Press ESC to return to the editor body. A save button is available in the top toolbar all the way to the right and will become visible when it receives focus.

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Paste your introduction into the textbox. Remember that the introduction should provide an overview of your selected article and end with your thesis statement.

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The next activity uses a rich text area. You can tab to the editor body. Press ALT-F10 to get to the toolbar. Press ESC to return to the editor body. A save button is available in the top toolbar all the way to the right and will become visible when it receives focus.

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Paste your body paragraphs into the textbox. Remember that each body paragraph should begin with a topic sentence and should contain evidence and your analysis of that evidence.

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The next activity uses a rich text area. You can tab to the editor body. Press ALT-F10 to get to the toolbar. Press ESC to return to the editor body. A save button is available in the top toolbar all the way to the right and will become visible when it receives focus.

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Paste your conclusion into the textbox. Your conclusion should begin with your thesis statement followed by a summary of the main points of your essay. Your conclusion should articulate insights about your claim established through your analysis.

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Now that you have filled in each of the textboxes above, click on the “Download Word Document” link below. When you open the Word document, you will see all of your responses from the prompts above saved and collated in the document. Save your document but DO NOT SUBMIT IT TO YOUR INSTRUCTOR JUST YET. You will continue to update this draft in the coming weeks and will make your final submission in Module 8.

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