Question Question Can you please help me to edit my essay to make it flow smoothly, change the inappropriate vocabularies, add more supporting materials to strength the main claim. Use two scholar resources. These include academic journals and books. In particular, find a scholarly article that helps you use the advance method of rhetorical criticism that you have selected in developing your analysis of the speech you have chosen. PS, can you please pay some attention on the thesis statement of the essay, I think my thesis is not strong enough regarding to the questions i am answering. And the structure of the paper. Thank you. , change the inappropriate vocabularies, add more supporting materials to strength the main claim. Use two scholar resources. These include academic journals and books. In particular, find a scholarly article that helps you use the advance method of rhetorical criticism that you have selected in developing your analysis of the speech you have chosen. PS, can you please pay some attention on the thesis statement of the essay, I think my thesis is not strong enough regarding to the questions i am answering. And the structure of the paper. Thank you.
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Can you please help me to edit my essay to make it flow smoothly, change the inappropriate vocabularies, add more
supporting materials to strength the main claim. Use two scholar resources. These include academic journals and books. In particular, find a scholarly article that helps you use the advance method of rhetorical criticism that you have selected in developing your analysis of the speech you have chosen.
PS, can you please pay some attention on the thesis statement of the essay, I think my thesis is not strong enough regarding to the questions i am answering. And the structure of the paper.
Thank you.