Hi!!! Could you help me with my paper
Hi!!! Could you help me with my paper. I have already written it.
I just need the corrections to be made that was graded by my teacher. He put the corrections on there. For my outline him mention to me to focus on a department rather than the whole city. So I would like to focus on a department name Office of Business Opportunity. The outline attached is a guide for the research paper. Both are already done but he have comments on there. Can you fix my paper?
Let me know if you have any questions.
Thanks!