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space to allow.I for easy navigation Technical description excellent 1.2 points CI points 1.2 points 0 points needs improvement not passing Score and Feedback introduces or
defines the object or process Do a La}:
audience describes what the
object or process
looks like and does
using a style or
organization
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importance, or
chronological; and
accommodating a
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information on the
physical
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other information
relevantto a lay
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accommodating the
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graphics. are labeled
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necessary] in APA
format
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aligned
appropriately for
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some tips. Can you include more graphics? Please see my inline comments) Also. can you include more description? See comments.
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